short story for school on CAMP :D

here's parts of my short story...

We clasped each other and hugged, exchanged numbers and emails and tears, and kept our view on those who left until they no longer were visible. When it was my turn, I didn't ley my eyes swell with salty water. I didn't have any expression upon me. I was as unfeeling and depressing as faded state cheerios floating in milk with a stench. I was a zombie. I took one last breath in the air I had always breathed in, one final look at the life I knew. I saw them waving me goodbye. I took a snapshot through the window and stared at it the complete time I rode on the bus, taking me into the world.

[I awakened, breathless, gasping for air. For in my dreams, you were there.]

My eyes opened and I peered around. The bus was nearly unfilled and the bus driver was shouting over me.

"Excuse me, Frannie, this is your stop!" He helps me up and I grab my bags. I step off the bus and enter an insignificant town midst countless plains that blanketed the earth like a quilt. My new parents stood with smiled plastered onto their faces. I swallowed. This was my new life, where I was stationed temporarily.

But I will by no means disregard my days previously.

[The pages of life fill the story of our love in a time long ago, where fairy tales come true.]